Monday, 14 October 2013

Haiku: To Attain Moksha...




life’s last pilgrimage
old couples with their young, move
through greens, for moksha.








This is in response to the Write Tribe Contest 2-Haiku

16 comments :

  1. What a divine haiku.
    Old couple going to pilgrimage with their young ones.

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  2. This is beautiful. A journey of life expressed so in a few words!

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  3. wow...this looks like a winning entry... lifes pilgrimage...amazing thought

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  4. Hey thanks for the entry :)

    PhenoMenon

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    1. Hi Sreedev,
      I've nominated you for a Liebster...

      Go check this - http://theconchblower.blogspot.in/2013/11/my-first-liebster.html

      Regards
      Kiran.

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